excellent great response my dear
i ditto love the way levine talks about his work
i also find that more interesting than the work itself
and prob would have selected the same section re futility too
i totally agree that it is barely intelligible but not really in an interesting way
but also agree at times new languages evolve from this kind of mania
i find it diffcult and frustrating but still i’m pleased it exists
i geek too
i think you are right to question the quailty of the output
the relation between content and structure – meaning and form
but i guess i’m also interested in work that pushes past
to make the form the meaning or the structure the content.
i just ordered ‘a void’ – the ‘e’ less novel that focuses on the pursuit of e as the main thrust of the plot
intrigued to know whether it is unintelligible or if as you say re the 5hr opera
you got to ride with it
til it starts to infiltrate and reveal its inner logic.
in part i’m blown away by the fact it was written
for the sheer ‘what if ness’ of it
but even more so by the translation efforts
originally in french
then to english
and also spanish with no a instead
translators unsung heros
will report back.
ok so i say structure because i think it’s far more precise.
form has many more interpretations for me.
and oed agrees so it must be right – pasted below
but maybe the more openended nature of form appeals to you more
i guess for me structure feels more inside
more understanding relations within
and form is a step remove
surveying the whole
what say you?
thanks for including your poems
great examples of responses to struture/form
for me it always begs the question
when are rules freedom and when are they hinderance / stricture?
start without and impose as you go or start with and mould to fit?
i’m with you too that the second balances the relationship better
i love the interplay between prefixed and not vocab
oh so similar and yet not and yet sometimes yes
and then it building to a fuller interplay across the whole
that tantalisingly reveals itself – it’s fun it’s cheeky – i love it
while the first has a complex structure
it is almost invisible to me
so the second seems generous
with the listening/reader included
in the unravelling of the fun and games
did you see the andrew grassie show at trg
years ago now 08
one work driven by structure
that at trg was out of context
i would have loved to have seen in situ
was at mobile home in london
he hung a group show by open call
photographed it from 8 view points
then returned all the work
and made meticulous tiny paintings of the photos
then hung the photos in the 8 places
so that the exhibition space was practically empty
and yet the ghosts of the secret show
were presented in what i imagine to be
uncanny – making you double take in the space
couple images attached to aide explanation
the structure is elaborate
and maybe unnecessary
but i love its convolution
and for me it becomes the principal subject
anyways enough from me for now
Definition of structure
1 the arrangement of and relations between the parts or elements of something complex:
the two sentences have equivalent structures
the company’s weakness is the inflexibility of its management structure
[mass noun] the quality of being organized: we shall use three headings to give some structure to the discussion
2 a building or other object constructed from several parts: the station is a magnificent structure and should not be demolished
Definition of form
1. the visible shape or configuration of something: the form, colour, and texture of the tree [mass noun]: the flowers of this shrub are remarkable both in form and colour
• the body or shape of a person or animal: his eyes scanned her slender form
• [mass noun] style, design, and arrangement in an artistic work as distinct from its content: these videos are a triumph of form over content
2. a particular way in which a thing exists or appears: essays in book form energy in the form of light
• any of the ways in which a word may be spelled, pronounced, or inflected: an adjectival form
• Philosophy the essential nature of a species or thing, especially (in Plato’s thought) regarded as an abstract ideal which real things imitate or participate in.
3. a type or variety of something: sponsorship is a form of advertising
• an artistic or literary genre: a form is as good as the writer who chooses it
• Botany a taxonomic category that ranks below variety, which contains organisms differing from the typical kind in some trivial, frequently impermanent, character, e.g. a colour variant. Also called forma.
4 [mass noun] the customary or correct method or procedure: an excessive concern for legal form and precedent
• [count noun] a ritual or convention: the outward forms of religion
• [count noun] a set order of words; a formula: a form of words
5. a printed document with blank spaces for information to be inserted: an application form
6. chiefly British a class or year in a school, usually given a specifying number: the fifth form
7. [mass noun] the state of a sports player or team with regard to their current standard of play: they are one of the best teams around on current form
• details of previous performances by a racehorse or greyhound: an interested bystander studying the form
• a person’s mood and state of health: she seemed to be on good form
• British informal a criminal record: they both had form
8. British a long bench without a back.
9. Printing, chiefly USvariant spelling of forme.
10. British a hare’s lair.
11. another term for shuttering.