Really cool text response today from Zoe Fothergill, my artist pal and sometime collaborator. Was really excited to hear what she made of the Emily Dickinson readings and loved that she responded so creatively. She’s let me post the whole of her notes here. One of the things I love about her perception of Subject Index is how visual she is, picking up lots of the environment and context of the piece, as well as the parts of the Dickinson text which struck her.
More notes from me about Day 3 will follow, but now over to Zoe:
Emily Dickinson and Iain Morrison
‘like a thief that fled gasping from the house’
spider is male?
formal bureaucratic context
brutal boundary
and yet love the listening slats
‘it would have starved a gnat’
vastness of the undertaking
someone there to hear a poem falling
‘still little girl’
proximity shifts
yet all safely
behind the barrier
‘falling timbers flying’
‘many things are fruitless’
lace cuff
ruffle of skirt
jump down from desk
numerical noting
‘a fork in being’s road’
spermatozoa wall paper
streaking dirty fingermarks
an upturned screw sitting on the counter
‘and sinew from within’
skirt skirts paper’s edge
from a height
‘tucks of dainty interspersion’
Interview Room 12
sky blue board
white text
on cream door
12
paper white
text black
bold
sticky fixer fixed behind
wire gridded safety glass
‘then a softness suffused the story’
rubber door stop
on blue herring bone flecked carpet
a nodding head for emphasis
behind waving branches
sun dappled
through window
‘the mighty merchant sneered’
expanded polly pockets veiling
2 smoke detectors
1 on my side
1 on the other side
‘just his sigh accented had been legible to me’
indistinct graffiti on silver metal frame
‘how hospitable the face’
in an inhospitable place
‘forever is composed of nows’
TIME POEM TO REVISIT
ken arrives iain stands up
duck egg colour on cover
orange highlighter arrow
from a distance
lit room
dark room
pairs
‘and decks to seat the skies’
beard lace collar and …